The book of John Doe

The Baroness smiles with something like relief, and the arrangements are made without delay.
You see the Baroness beckon one of her vassals and hand him a small, velvet bag. The vassal nods subtly, then discreetly motions for your guide to follow him. They step aside and exchange a few quiet words. You’re too preoccupied with the Baroness’s piercing gaze to catch more than a glance. She questions you about your journey—speaking in polite, measured tones—and commends your courage in the face of danger. When you finally look around again, both your guide and the mysterious bag have vanished without a trace.

You stay the night at her relative’s abode in this city, Dahranjia—a sun-bleached jewel perched on the edge of the Syrian desert. The heat outside is merciless, but within the cool marble halls of the house, you find refuge. Rose water perfumes the air, silk curtains whisper in the breeze, and quiet music floats from distant rooms like fragments of a half-remembered dream.
In the morning, a guest arrives—a man of plain dress and sharp bearing, introduced only as “an old friend” of the Baroness. But something in the weight of his glance tells you he is more than he appears.
After polite greetings and a tray of sweet tea and pistachios, he leans in and lowers his voice.
—I know what happened to you,— he says. —Abandoned in the dunes by those you trusted. Hiacynt—son of the Voivode Ignacjusz of Drevanyn—and Lady Margaret of Velhradus. I saw them myself not two days ago, passing through a caravanserai north of Al-Mazir. Unbothered. Laughing.
You narrow your eyes.
—How did you learn about it?
He leans back slightly, fingers tapping the rim of his glass.
—News traverses the desert faster than sandstorms. And unlike sand, it sticks where it lands. I’d wager I know more about your situation than you do.
You say nothing, waiting for the last blow to hit you.
—There’s talk,— he continues, lowering his voice. —Of a plot. Not just the betrayal in the dunes—but something larger. Whispers that your name is being dragged through the courts of Zalenica. That a forged letter from your hand has already arrived in Moravice, bearing false orders. That your absence is no accident—it’s part of a careful erasure.
The room seems to contract around you.
—I don’t say this to frighten you,— he adds. —But the people you thought were allies? They’ve moved on without you. Quickly. Too quickly. Someone wanted you out of the way. And now you are.
You sit still for a moment, heart slow and heavy.
You stare at him.
—You’re certain?
He nods.
—I don’t forget faces. Especially not ones that leave people behind to die in the sand.
The words land with force. Silence pools between you like shadow.
—I can help you find them,— he continues. —But it won’t be clean. You’d need men who don’t ask questions—men who know how to dig. That kind of loyalty comes at a price.

You hesitate.
His words ring with urgency, with a truth that feels too sharp, too sudden—but also too plausible. Still, something in you resists. Maybe it’s pride. Maybe it’s exhaustion. Maybe it’s the thought of becoming like them—those who deal in shadows.
He watches you closely.
—You’re not convinced.
—I don’t know if I want revenge — you murmur, half to yourself.
—It’s not revenge — he says. —It’s clarity. You want to return to Moravice with clean hands and a clear name? Then you need to understand what’s being done in your absence.
You look away, to the long silk curtains stirring in the breeze.
—And if I don’t?
—Then you go back in the dark. And by the time you reach your capital, the locks may already have changed.
He downs the last of his tea and rises.
—I’ll leave you to consider. I have business to attend to in the city. But if you’re willing… I’ll return before dusk. Be ready to ride. It won’t be easy. We’ll move by night, across lands where men disappear without reason—and the ones who find them rarely ask why.
He inclines his head politely and vanishes down the corridor, leaving only the soft click of sandals on marble and the faint scent of cardamom in his wake.
You’re still staring at the door when the Baroness enters. Her eyes read yours too easily.
—I know what he offered — she says gently. —And I know what you lack.
She reaches into her sleeve and produces a velvet pouch—modest in size, but weighted with promise. The glint of cut stone peeks through the opening: diamonds, cool and gleaming.
—You refused them once — she says. —But this isn’t a gift. It’s an investment in my own safety. If you choose to go after the truth… at least you won’t go empty-handed.
She places the pouch on the table between you and withdraws, leaving you alone with your thoughts.
The shadows grow long on the walls. The music fades from the distant room. And the choice stands before you, quiet and immense:


You reach for the pouch and close your fingers around it. The weight is not just financial—it’s a promise, a path, a door opening onto something dark and uncertain.
—I must know — you whisper to the empty room. —I must know why.


Your hand remains still. You stare at the pouch, then gently push it away.
—No — you say quietly. —I don’t need it. I have more pressing matters. This would only be a diversion.
You rise, heart heavy, and walk to the window. Whatever happened in the desert will remain buried in sand. You’ve chosen the road ahead—uncertain, yes, but clean.

soyjuanma86

I'm a writer born in Argentina, but currently living in Poland. I work as an English and French teacher, translator and copywriter.

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